Friday, 14 March 2014

Writing - Swimming Sports

WALT: Write to inform
Task: Share my experiences at Russell Street School swimming sports as a recount.

Success Criteria

  • Plan
  • Introduction- Where, When, Who, Why
  • n order
  • Past tense (walked, ran, said)
  • Adding details, think about what are the most powerful words


  1. I love your personal voice and descriptive language Quade. My favourite sentences were...I was filled with butterflies in my tummy, it was going to be the best Thursday ever and finally IT WAS NOT COOL. You clearly showed me how you felt, when and where you went and what you did. You can be proud of this great story. Ka Pai!

  2. Sorry I meant to write Qwade not quade....

  3. WOW Son!! This writing is amazing!! I really like the way you planned your writing first because it has definitely helped you with your ideas!! Love Mum!!