Wednesday, 11 February 2015

Qwades me story

Draft 1


my name is Qwade I am smart friendly lazy and love video games.my favourite food is lasagna my favourite thing to do is watching tv.my hair is like chocolate that got melted and then dried up one my head.my eyes are brown my skin is pale a I like to wear shorts t-shirts and chandells.I wish I could have a device that can do anything and you can enter video games with it to bad I don't have one.

2 comments:

  1. Qwade I really like the descriptive language you have used in your writing. Maybe next time you could proof read your writing to make sure you have capital letters and spaces after your fuul stops.

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