Monday, 24 August 2015

My reading about myths and legends

Qwades prediction- It's going to be about telling us that myths are about old stories
Qwades questioning- Why do people tell myths they are fake?
Qwades summarising- Myths and legends are telling people lessons and stories
Qwades prediction its- About more gods
Qwades questioning- Whats the tale of merlin?
Qwades summarising- Its about how storytelling works
Qwades prediction- Magic!!!!!!!
Qwades questioning- What's a magic carpet do?
Qwades summarising- Its about a magic carpet
Qwades prediction- A story about rainbows!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Qwades questing- Did rainbows gave us food and rain?
Qwades summary- Rainbows saved the humans
Prediction- Tigers tigers
Qwades- Question what attacked Hercules in the beginning of the story?
Qwades- Summary fighting solves everything
Prediction- Basketball player or something
Qwades question- What is the name of the basketball player?
Qwades summary- Basketball players can do miracles
Qwades prediction- Explosions
Qwades question- was there any smoke at the volcano?
Summary- Sacrifice for the good of the volcano
Prediction- Masks
Question- How do you make a mask?
Qwades summary- This is how you make a mask
Qwades prediction- Legends
Qwades question- What's a legend?
Qwades summary- This is about legends
Qwades prediction- Ned Kelly 
Qwades question- Are all legends good?
Qwades summary- Not all legends are good
Qwades prediction- FOOD
qwades question- Are there any strong people in the Wild West?
Qwades summary- It's all about the Wild West
Qwades prediction- Its about stars
Qwades questing- Do stars make shapes?
Qwades summary- Stars make shapes
Qwades prediction- MORE FOOD
Qwades questions- Who is that chef?
Qwades summary- It's about a chef
Qwades prediction- Legends
Qwades question- Do kids dress up like gods?
Qwades summary- Kids can dress up like gods and legends
Qwades prediction- I DON'T KNOW
Qwades question- Are legends and myths similar?
Qwades summary- Myths and legends are the same
Qwades prediction- Magic
Qwades question- Is this about time travel?
Qwades summary- This is about time travel
Qwades Prediction- FOOD PLZ
Qwades question- Do myths and legends belong to people who died ages ago?
Qwades summary- Its about impossible stories like wrestling dragons
Qwades prediction- Letters
Qwades question- Are firefighters brave?
Qwades Summarising- Be brave
Qwades prediction- Mervyn
Qwades question- Who's mervyn?
Qwades summary- Mervyn is a myth expert

Tuesday, 18 August 2015

Inquiry Writing

WALT retell a Myth / legend from a country we are researching.
Co-constructed SC:

Make sure your information is correct and if there are a variety of versions, choose the most well known
keep your writing in order:
beginning, middle and end
make sure you have your plan
put it into your own words
use more interesting words, 
time connectives - suddenly, later, unexpectedly, meanwhile, next minute...after that
proof read your writing
highlighter strategy

Editing your story is a very important  - Make sure you read it through carefully and check:
Will your story make sense to your reader and will it interest them?
Have you given a satisfactory ending?
Is your spelling correct?
Make sure you have used a range of punctuation ,  .  !  “  “  ?  (  ) 
 Start a new paragraph for:
•A change of time, e.g. Early the next morning…
•A change of place e.g. On the other side of the mountain stood…
•A change of action e.g. At that moment the lights went out
•A change of character e.g. Unexpectedly, Dr Townley rounded the corner.

In the Beginning of time there was nothing but pure darkness and water. Nothing moving or breathing. After many ages a small ripple started, from beneath the ripple a big white flower appeared. The flower opened and the petals created a light. In the very centre of the flower Atum a god child was born. He stood up and gazed a first look into the world and amazingly the flower pulled him back down to the watery depth. It happened over and over again. Atum grew lonely with nobody to talk to but light. So he blew across the palms of his hands and in all directions with a gust of wind circulating around him and then it swept away, this was Shu god of air. Atum tried so hard to blow over his hands again, he kept doing it over and over again. There were drops of moisture in every direction it was the amazing Tefnut goddess of rain and dew. Shu and Tefnut liked to play together, they raced about in big circles chasing each other on the surface Shu blew wind storms that turned into waves. Tefnut threw down rain to make the waves flat again and Shu was very blustery. They were awesome together. They had two children Geb the God of earth and Nut the goddess of the sky. Atum was upset because the God and goddess were too close together so he couldn't make the trees and animals. He told Shu to get between them. Shu lifted Nut even higher till she arched over Nut. Finally, the world was complete and he called the gods, like the gods of love, wisdom and justice to rule this world. But Thoth the god of wisdom took pity on Nut "you shall have children, I will make extra days for you to have them". So Thoth visited Khonsu the God of the moon checkers with light and dark moonstones. The checkers decided how many days were in a year. He gave her 5 days. Nut gave birth to Osiris on the first day, Horus on the second, Seth on the third, Isis on the forth and Nepthys on the fifth. Atum grew old so he left Osiris in charge of the earth and he said "I will retire to the heavens." So Nut took him and lifted him to heavens each morning. Everyday, Nut recieves a gold disk from Atum that starts from the East to the West.

Fractions I'm so good at this

Tuesday, 4 August 2015

Hi my reading - WALT use reciprocal reading

Qwades summary: The buildings was the thing that made the Egyptians Popular.
Qwades predictions: I think the Egyptians lived like kings and made everyone slaves
I wonder what the pharaohs and queens wore in ancient Egypt and who is Hatshepsut?
Qwade 2nd summary: The pharaohs and queens where they wore a false beard and a crown of Cobras
Qwades prediction part 2: I think it's about Ancient Egypt mummies and stuff like that
Qwades clarifying: 2 nope I understand
Qwades summarsing: The gods have animal heads
Qwades predicting: I think mummies again (just because I love mummies)
Qwade questioning: Where do the guts and stuff go after the mummy is in the coffin? What is on top of the mummy in the coffin?
Qwades summarising: MUMMIES are made from a human with no brains no intestines and other organs.
Qwades prediction: I want to see more gods and MUMMIES
Qwades questioning: Do mummies get poked in the mouth with a stick?
Qwades summary: Mummy's get poked in the mouth with a stick.
Qwade prediction: I hope ITS ABOUT MUMMIES
Qwade summary: It's about how pyramids work
Qwade questioning: What are pyramids made of?
Qwades predicting: Umm maybe more mummies?
Qwades summary: Some pharaohs are buried under ground
Qwade questions: What is the name of the underground tombs?
Qwade prediction I want something cool like mummies I guess.
Qwades summary: Pharaohs and their queens worshiped gods in temples.
Qwade questions: Why do people go to temples?
Qwade prediction: I hope it's about MUMMIES again
Summarising by Qwade: It's about hieroglyphics and why they use them.
Questioning by Qwade: What are hieroglyphics?
Prediction by Qwade: Maybe it's about their games and stuff
Summary by Qwade: It's about old games and toys
Questioning by Qwade: What are the names of some of the old games?

I liked

WALT write a recount about an idea we had in our writers notebook.

Success Criteria - Co constructed

I liked

I was on YouTube all of a sudden the tv turned off and then the lights went out then Paige said "it's a power cut" I didn't care at all. It was really boring we decided to play monopoly we had to use our candles I am afraid of fire. I went to check on my Nan (also my cousin was there and she helped me) my Nan gave us ice blocks "YUM!" It was tasty. When I tried to sit down I tripped and bruised my leg I couldn't play monopoly that was sad but I had my iPad. Suddenly the lights turned on "finally but what's with the flickering lights?" Don't worry my mum fixed it so then I just kept playing on my iPad and that's it, you can stop reading now, bye see yah later? Come on! Stop reading don't you know a ending when you see one SHOO! oh my god please just stop reading it this is getting old so go you know what I'm just going to stand over there... You are still reading 'inhale' this is getting really old so now I'm just going to say it's the end, story over.

WALT use rounding and compensating to solve multiplication problems